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Auburn Wisp That Slowly fall into Winter Clouds

The Night will over come
and cold would set in
the Day would sleep
and clouds would cover it

Darkness would come
rise in power
Light would fade
to never set back till Spring

Wind will run wild
leaving a frosting chill
Cloud would come
and shadow the world

Leafs would fall
and the Snow
would set in
grass would sleep

Auburn lovely wisp
would fade
as the Cloud's of Winter
would set in

Author notes

What it almost Winter! And It was snowing in Maine last week ^^!

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  • HugsForEveryone
    November 12, 2009

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    Wow, it was snowing?! I hope there's no snow in Portland yet. This was really good (: You made some great descriptions and it made a lovely image in my head. That's something only a great poet can do. Keep writing, Sister Bird! (((:
    ~Kera


    • MagicElves
      November 12, 2009
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      thanks and it was snowing on Nov. 5 right after Ms. Myers birthday but only in the morning then it stop and so far it's been really sunny since then
      ~Mich