amorous Peacock
mistaking my hun for his Peahen
feathers jiggling
A contest entry
- PEACOCK HAIKU by Swan song.
700 points, ended November 21, 2009, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Have seen the picture before.
And then you found a perfect write for it.
I have so many in my college grounds. But they never come near me
. They might be decent ones! 
So I am left collecting feathers once they have left.
Congrats for the trophy.
-Swati
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Featured Visions through Haiku poet
Good 'Ku subject and captured moment. I like the humor injected into this work.
Write on!
Dennis
I'm a new member to the group trying to catch up on the featured poets section.
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A clever write.
Congrats on the Bronze.
Your wife got a good opportunity to get this pic. clicked with the peacock. I think otherwise the peacocks get scared when people are around.
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you had better watch out those creatures are brutal lol
not really but I like the moment captured here and comend you on a fine haiku
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Thank you very much for the Bronze...
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i do not understand "haiku" but you do have the romantic words with a beautiful picture...i really enjoyed it...good luck!..
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A winner!
Giggle,cant blame the so called ,'amorous Peacock 'for ,'mistaking ', your hun as his peahen your hun is a pretty sight for any eye to behold peacock or human all inclusive-your poem has been written very well- it is light in mood-humorus -playful and somewhere I sense a lot of affection for your hun-I have enjoyed this piece a great deal -the picture accompanying it is very apt -Wishing you loads of luck for the contest-"Jai Ho"
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Your prediction was right
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