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crushing on a poet

i've never met
yet secretly
want to write long letters to
he reminds me of why
i fuck poets
that someday
naked and spent
he might speak to me
like how he does
when he's speaking to no one
if that is still even anyone
anymore.

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  • EstherG
    February 21

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    Love this - pointed and abstract all at the same time.

    'naked and spent' is particularly gorgeous in this context, as are those last lines, which are at once intimate and lonely-feeling.

    Lovely, this.