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There's Darkness in your Voice


When you speak to me, your voice shows sadness in your soul.
Could it be, that your heart is broken and not whole?
Sometimes, I see you hiding away those crystal tears.
Do you need me, to help fight away all of your fears.

When you speak to me,

there's a delicate darkness in your voice.
You're dying softly,

you're dying slowly by your own choice.

 

Hopelessly dreaming, that it will all just fade away,

A broken heart, split through the center, right about halfway.

I will wipe away all of those drops, streaming straight down your face,

I will be here for you, with my truely loving embrace.

 

When you speack to me,

there's a delicate darkness in your voice.

You're dying softly,

you're dying slowly by your own choice.

 

How long will it take, to patch up the wounds of your heart?

From this moment on, our lives will begin to restart.

Now no more pain will be put upon you.

I willl mend your heart and my love will always remain true.

 

When you speak to me,

There's a delicate darkness in your voice.

You're dying softly,

you're dying slowly by your own choice. 

 

 

 





 

A contest entry

thinking about mending other peoples pain... i got my inspiration from someone special,,, i will alway love that person and i hope that the will always love me!! sry if i made you sad....

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  • boredmax
    December 1
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    well good this is amazing


  • Mik-Kayler
    November 12
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    good job babe!!

    its good.... sad but good!
    how did u make Lyle sad???
    why is it he can inspire u but I CANT!! tht pizzes me off!


  • Behind.These.Eyes
    November 10
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    well... lol i like it...but i wrote it so... lol