the day you left
my body went cold
my heart became numb
no longer able to feel.
i could feel no love
feel no hate, no pain.
i became a lifeless corpse.
being pulled through life by
the puppet strings i thought were
forever gone.
but here they are once again.
back to being what i once was.
what i once hated.
but i'm destined.
destined to always be this way.
it must be my fate to be alone.
banished into an eternal abyss.
to have no one to love.
and no one to love me.
without you i became nothing again.
the girl no one cared about.
i thought you would be with me forever.
like you always promised.
but so many of those have been broken.
the promise of love.
the promise of life.
promises made to me.
once gone...i couldn't handle it.
but, since you're gone forever
i can do nothing but except the fact that...
maybe you never loved me.
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This is really good. I've felt like that a lot. It's very deep and just great.
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i love this piece it is very emotion and very easy to relate to well at least it is for me lol...my favorite part is...i thought you would be with me forever.
like you always promised.
but so many of those have been broken.
the promise of love.
the promise of life.
promises made to me.
once gone...i couldn't handle it....
those lines are very powerful...great job keep it up!!!
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wow this is insaine i can relate to this so much great job
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"i can do nothing but except the fact that...
maybe you never loved me."
I've had to go through that a couple of times myself. It is really hard but all you can do is accept it and move on. You'll find love though I'm sure
-Steve-
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