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Rockman and Blues

Amazing
Awesome
All together beautiful

She's all I could ever want
All I could ever need
She's all I have
and all I'll ever want.

Beautiful
Artistic
All together amazing
I just want her happiness

She's all I could ever want
All I could ever need
She's all I have
and all I'll ever want.

Horrid
Disgusting
All together disturbing

I'm all I detest
all I loath
yet I have all I want
Ain't that somethin'?

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Written April 15th, 2004

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  • To Be Continued
    April 15, 2004
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    It is something.
    Something beautiful.
    We are genuinely lucky. Thanks for putting up with me.
    I love you Mike...


  • April 15, 2004
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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    hey
    I really liked this poem. Really nice. DONT PUt URSELF DOWN!!!! u know ur artistic, ur amazing too. thanks for being here for me...i really appreciate it. YouR aLL that anyone could ask for...yOu know im always here for u. Beautiful work.
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss**