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Dance With Me, Daddy

Dance with me,
Daddy,
I want to feel you
Holding me

Dance with me,
Daddy,
Like you used to
When I was a little girl

Dance with me,
Daddy,
And keep me close
And safe from the world

Dance with me,
Daddy,
Like we did
During the days you weren’t sick

Dance with me,
Daddy,
I’ll hold you up
And make sure you don’t fall

Dance with me,
Daddy,
Hold onto me tightly
To steady yourself

Dance with me,
Daddy,
I’ll be sure
To keep you safe

Dance with me,
Daddy,
Just one last time
Before you go

Dance with me,
Daddy,
I don’t want
To let you go.

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  • PinkeyPromise
    9 hours ago
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    i love this poem its a truely great write with alot of emotion. I love the way you repeated "Dance with me, Daddy". Amazing write