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Margate Summer of 56.

A triplet of blue, topped off, in white hats
Saunters before yellow laden figurines
Motionless coruscating fluid azure
Tempt the adventurous into its clutch.

Ears full, feminine gaggle shy giggles,
The birth of tender youthful emotions
Concealed by bravado lustful content
Twelve eyes meet, six hearts in surrender.

Dreamland a vista of helter-skelter
Sets eventide romantic interlude.
Boisterous, boastful matelots corrugate
To divide maidens divine treasures.

Seven days spent, heavenly, bye the sea
Then off in a ship, their own Odyssey.

 

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  • Ani Grace
    November 25
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    Wow! Is your next one gonna say where we're off to ?
    Sun in the sand
    and a drink in my hand...
    with no bottom...
    No shoes... no shirt...no problem...!
    Very nice image ... glad I stopped by...lol


  • Mantha
    November 12
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    This one makes me smile i like that

    • SimplySonnets gold member
      November 13
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      This is based on a true holiday, seven glorious days of discovery,lol.