I don't care,
What anyone else thinks,
I want you,
And that makes my heart sink,
We're so far away,
So far apart,
And it's been like this,
Since the start,
I love you,
More than anything,
But this distance thing might not work,
It might be breaking,
I never see you,
I hardly hear from you,
Except for texts,
And calls in few,
I hate long distance relationships,
I hate them all,
But I love you so much,
So I'll try not to fall,
I can't love anyone else,
No one but you,
You are just amazing,
And you think I am too,
I hate that I feel this way,
I really do,
But I've been through this before,
With more than a few,
I've had long distance relationships before,
Many a time,
But they all blew up in my face,
Because I was blind,
But I want this to be different,
Not like before,
We'll make this work,
We'll get through this war,
We'll get through this together,
Hand in hand,
Through all the difficulties,
As though it were sand,
If we want to be together forever,
We'll have to live through all this shit,
We need to work this out,
Work it to the bit,
I love you so much,
And I want this all to work out,
I trust you,
Now let's stop this bout.
Author notes
Everyone knows what it's like to have a long distance relationship. This is my 4th one actually. 3 out of the 4 were in the same area, but I wrote this to get out my feelings of wanting to make this one work and not blow up in my face. That has happened to me with my first two relationships, and I don't want my heart broken again.
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awwh all your poems are good
so yours always doing something right :
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i don't really think all of them are good but everyone who reads them tell me they are so i guess i am doing something right, for a change.
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Thats Beautiful...Very True!
X Keep Up The Good Work X
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thanx sweetie
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Love it. I almost cried which says alot cz its hard to make me cry. anyways awesom! -
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omg really?? wow. lolz. thanx
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its amazing it realy is
i've actually got tears in my eyes
well done
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wow really? i never even thought it'd be that good. lolz. well thanx it shows I'm finally doing something right
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