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flower

I see flowers
Where real flowers grow

I see true love
Where true love grows

I feel the wind
Where the real wind blows

I taste freedom
Where freedom can go

I see beauty
Where all her beauty glows

I cherish her
Which makes my heart so

I sense destiny
The direction we shall go

I touch a flower
A flower in her soul

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  • dreamofolwin
    November 12
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    I thought this was just beautiful. I loved how it started and ended with a flower. Aahh, a lovely romantic write! Well done .