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Learning To Fly

I'm going to teach you how to fly
          But you'll need to trust me
                    No matter what I say...



How can you teach me to fly
          When I do not have wings?
                    All I can do is fall...


Then I shall grow my own wings
          And I'll swoop down to catch you
                    Together we can take to the skies...

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  • EntombedCrystalRose
    November 15, 2009

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    Short, sweet, and so easy to visualise, its more like a film than a peom in my head. Lovely!

    God I have a lot of reading to do to catch up on your poems... curse yoooooooooooou


  • Samantha Jane
    November 10, 2009

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    wow

    so short yet so damn powerful
    i love it