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Love Was Never Meant To Be

Love is nothing but a bunch of lies

They cut you and break you

Until you die

And all this

Shows is that we were week

From the mind to our hearts

So it goes to show I'm love and I were just never meant to be

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  • oldschoolhero gold member
    November 10
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  • amberplatten
    November 10

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    I like it a lot. Nice and simple, no confusing lines. Can seriously relate to this at the moment. Very cool poem. Might be nice in a song lyric maybe??? Like it.x

  • bossluv
    November 10
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    i like

    i like this is was straight to the point and the truth