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Bliss

Taste your sweetness
dance upon my lips
locked in loves kiss
our tongues play
in beautiful bliss

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  • La Kajira silver member
    November 11
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    Very sensual, this offers quite the visual in few short words! Well done, good luck in the contest.


  • bunnyslasher157
    November 10

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    Wow... This is beautiful. This poem blew me off my feet. Good job on this. Good job and keep writing!!


  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    November 10

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    Another beautiful and sensuous write, Robin, You've really been on a poetic roll lately; keep 'em coming. Wonderful work!