Saying goodbye was not what I want to do,
Had you left me alone, I was happy with you
Making me go home at the end of the day,
You’ve done everything to push me away
People cloud you and lay up in your home
I can’t even get, just a call on my phone
The beer the drugs, the thuds all come there,
You expect me to think all is clear?
You tell me you love me…
Now what do I see?
A bitch in your bed and “hey” it’s not me…
My life was straight’ until I met you…
Now I’m here and alone with nothing to do
Tonight I pray as I lie in my bed
Wishing that this was all in my head
I’m closing my eyes and dreaming of you
Asking my self, what did I do?
I hope you can understand and have never been there.
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oh, I've been there, but maybe a long, long time ago..back in the 70's... the era of free love, everything was sex and drugs.
This is a very sad poem, beautifully written, that I'm sure a lot of us can relate to, especially trippy little hippies, like me!
one typo at the end- "Tonight I pray as I lye in my bed"
lye should be *lie
lye is a corrosive alkaline substance.
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Thank you Debbie, When I wrote this, my mind was not where it should of been. To much heartache to stop and think. Much appreciated.
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This is so true. I've often felt like this myself. Great second paragraph, "make me...".
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You were so right in your comment on my poem. I would say "Welcome" to this place but for the sorrow that you should be here. For you know so well as I that this is not such a great place to be. I am so sorry for your heartache, tis a pain I know so well. You express it in your own unique way. And the ending line describes it best.
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goodbyes are so hard to take and not know what to do is another Love the way you penned this awesome and thank you for sharing well said hugs Angel♥
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Tis a sad day when most people you hear from, have been going through the same hells as you are going through right now. i totally understand.
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