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Searching.

Searching.
Frantic.
Crying.

I can't find my razor.
So I find a piece of glass.
I break it.

I drag it as hard as I can
into my arm.
The blood is so beautiful.

I feel a release.
My searching is done.
I'm calm.
No more tears.

I'm happy once again.

Author notes

I've been cutting since I was 12 or 13.
I stopped for over a year and recently started again.

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  • Deadly Sinner
    November 12
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    Very, very good yet dark

    I find this a strong delve into your soul, who you are, what you are...
    I have been cutting since 13, a girl at school first made me think about it, I haven't looked back.
    I would like to thank you for this poem, it has made me think and I enjoy a bit of darkness on the side.

    Deadly.


  • Amera gold member
    November 10
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    This is very strong and vivid. You have the heart of a poet. Your notes made me sad.

    Love,
    Amera