By: Alex Leimbeck
10-31-2009
She stares blindly
I seek to see what holds her
All I see is the blinding sun
Others would seek to know
Others to be blinded
They wish to see what she sees
To bother to speak
Is to bother to waste your breath
She hears not
Does she see a being
That is not of this reality?
Does she see the future
One no one can predict?
Does she see you and me
Our inner selves?
She'll continue to stare blindly
Into an abyss
That shall ultimately
Swallow her whole...
Author notes
This is just.... a poem.... I don't know. It's not real.
Tell me your thoughts....
Comments
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wooooooooooow...and it left me blinded by moment of raised awes!there must be deep meaning into all this which i think made you create this..its not just a thought,its real and in you, that is why it came out of you...the imagery it sets is just too awsum!the flow is also thrilling
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Thanks!
Yeah, I guess there is something behind this one. It kind of goes along with another poem of mine, ... I go searching for it. And can't find it. How... uncool.
But basically it was a poem that was also about people staring randomly into the sky. I'll put it back up when I find it. 
I'll send you a link to it too so you can get the general connection. But honestly, I am not totally sure what it does symbolize, maybe everyone's constant gazing towards something better, or something they miss so much.
Anyways, thanks so much for the comment! Going to check out a poem of yours now!
-Phoenix
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