What a sweet disguise,
that smile of yours.
What a delectable delivery of words,
A fools trap.
I fell hard,
into an impeccable net of lies,
one that was woven out of tantalizing silk.
When your blind, it's hard to escape
a perfectly bound snare.
Is it my fault that I slipped
into your insidious scheme?
I think you pushed me.
But I have finally awaken
from this infatuate nightmare.
It is over!
And just like a nightmare...
you are easily forgotten.
Author notes
Ambrea
A contest entry
- make me cry, make me feel alive. by savemysoul.
1400 points, ended November 20, 2009, 120 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really like this piece. It's somewhat similar to some of the poems which I have previously written so I can pretty much relate to this one. I've to agree with jordan than it is indeed easy to follow. The piece draws its beauty from its simplicity. I like how the poem started.
My favorite part:
I fell hard,
into an impeccable net of lies,
one that was woven out of tantalizing silk.
Nice write.
Keep the ink flowing =]
- Dray
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i like this. it was easy to follow. thanks for entering and good luck.
-- jordan.
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