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Intersecting Lines

Horizontal and vertical lines
Flowing beyond creation's confines
Cross to form an angle sublime
At the edge of my cubicle

Through it I view a scene that dazzles 
Canvas like without an easel:
A tiny tree with pale leaves shaking,
Strewn along thin boughs entwining

Behind, the world grows clear and hoary,
Sudden gales turn calm ponds stormy.
Autumn's brought with it this year
A settled bliss my heart reveres

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  • oneheartstring
    November 12, 2009
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    my favorite color and season as well