If I could write you a song,
I would spill it all inside of your head.
If you never woke up,
I'd sit by your grave and wait for your ghost
to take my hand.
If I still can't learn to breathe easier,
I'll learn to let myself go.
If my heart collapses,
and blood runs down your neck,
I hope it will keep you warm.
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this is deep.
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Freaking amazing!!!
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You flatter me. ^o^
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I agree with David.
Second stanza is my favorite. That in itself could be a completely new poem.
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Very vivid and colourful images bunched into a remarkably sweet and yet lovingly morbid poem. Great work!
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The imagery is very profound. I just feel like each image can be expanded, made tangible with some more intimate diction.
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