Gather wings and fly
the yonder calls you so warm
the birds give you company
as you sing my song
and sway in your rhythm.
Leave me behind and I am so fine
my heart aches and pain
please do forget
you have plans
and joining this new love
and his clan
adieu cannot call you my love!
My tears I bear
do you hear
close those ears
and have no fears
I want you to accelerate
and hasten up new love gears.
One final salty drop drops
turns red
oh God!
it writes on floor
your name
spreading
fast
in alphabets
I palm the earth
to silken erase
for the last time
that you were so dear
my life
and its prime.
Author notes
my life
and its prime.
Who is that now?Still wondering.
Please tell me what you think
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the third stanza speaks to me......the best out of all of them......life and prime....melds with time.....gr8 read......lp&h
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The second stanza, for me, shows the poem
to silken erase
for the last time
If only we could erase.
Yes, a very strong write.
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wow, very powerful and emotional. Beautiful. I love the last stanza ! Great write, keep going
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This is very good actually and the last part was really goood and thanks for sharing
Deja (hershey101)
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This is a very strong piece, the last stanza was really good. =} beautiful writing, thanks for sharing.
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wonderful my friend
This is powerful write full of you
full of emotion.
I tryuly enjoyed.
Thank you for sharing this
keep the ink flowing
fire
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excellent
This reads so powerful and deep
One of your first reads for me
Makes one think that is for sure
10 stars for this one: **********
Love it
Keep on penning sweetie
Hugs
Susan~~~~
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I really am lacking in ideas of what to say.
But I like it anyway, great write
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