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The wine embodied a lavish texture like a sensual caress.

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  • Mountain Woman gold member
    November 10
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    You go girl! Very nice descriptive write. Makes me want to get a glass.


  • Not-The-Sun
    November 10

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    oooh : ) i like this because it is different than the other entries; "wine embodied a lavish texture" is EXCELLENT good luck in the contest!


    • ledan72poet
      November 12
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      oops

      Hi, I had added a second submission last night to the contest and this one was bumped out it appears. Thank you for your compliment. Not sure if the other one "sharpened words" is any good. Live and learn!


    • ledan72poet
      November 10
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      Thank you

      Creating a descriptive thought in just 10 words is challenging to me! I didn't want to use the actual word Tongue. I am glad that you like it.

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