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[ Autumn always seems to reach ]

Autumn always seems to reach
back for the summer sun
her arms extend for days and
when she smiles the clouds are gone
I lost myself in her
even when it rains
my love never dampens
my heart doesn't even sink
when her beauty falls to the floor
but my mouth tastes sour
when she loses her color
dying with a small segment of time

there will never be another Autumn

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    January 4
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    I =know not like the last one well said hun always hugs ♥