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missing the girl butterflies

I miss them fluttering
the noise deep within
you make me float
with thoughts of you
your body so beautiful
and paints with a splash
images of you my eyes do flash
I crave the feelings you once did give
I miss the girl I used to fly with
take this and make it real
I miss the butterflies, girl
and sweet kisses you've dealt
but now im on a path
its now different but true
but girls' kisses are much better
when you're feeling blue
thats definatly true too

Author notes

I miss my other part of me..the feelings the thoughts and warmth of the other part of me...although I am happy wiht my life now..i feel im lacking that part a bit...who knows if Ill feel the butterflies again...I dont expect all to understand..thanks!

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