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10:24 Pm

ten twenty four
reads the alarm clock
and i am still jealous

but not in love.

No, defininently
not
in love.

when teenage lovers
>stop<
committing suicide
after a night of passion
then maybe,
then
i'll allow myself
to fall in love

But no,
not tonight.

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  • blindandproudofit
    November 18, 2009

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    i liked this. i thought it was quite powerful even though it was quite short sometimes i think it's better that way. it actually made me think quite a bit. thanks for sharing it was good to read.