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Summer to Fall

Many things happen
When the sun starts to freeze
Hearts are either broken
Or hearts start to beat
Summer is known for happiness
Fall is known for fear
But what does one feel
In the transition from one to the next
How does one go
From happy to scared
From laughing
To being frightened
No one can truly know
But when Fall starts to come
There’s only one thing to do
That is to just wait
Wait for summer to begin anew

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  • ailill
    November 22
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    Profound piece.. good description of mood for summer and fall.. good imagery too.. I really like how some lines are phrased, such as
    'Many things happen
    When the sun starts to freeze' that is a good line..
    This piece can become a gem...! Good work..!