Under the rib cage, your lungs expand
They lay next to your cold heart
Which pounds at your warm chest
Your lips they are blue, and shivering
Your hair soft and long
I can see your breath in the air
There is blood on your neck
Did I do this?
I must have
For there is blood on my mouth
You lay there in front of me
You ask me why?
I couldn't help myself
Is all I could reply
Your skin turns pale
You slowly fade
How could I do this?
I loved you so
I couldn't help myself
Please, please don't go
Did you enjoy? I hope so.
Comments
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Oh wow. This is amazing, and I almost never say that about poetry. I'm a very bad critic. I loved this. Great use of imagery it seemed like I was there. Its probably because I like vampires or something but I think this is really good.
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