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A Season

In one sudden whistle
A bitter, vicious wind
Reminds some of the woes
Still waiting to begin

In one clear drop of water
A hope can then debut
Woes become a chance
And all life can start anew

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  • LesbianOfLove silver member
    November 9

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    Reminds some of the woes
    Still waiting to begin
    That alone, really makes me think, It's really great inspiration.
    Nice poem, keep writing.