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My Wings(Too Soon Goodbye/continued)

I stand from my slouching

my spine shooting stabbing at me

arching my back in pain

my depression was all in vein

I see that know my friend

I'm sorry for blame my self for your death

 

Thank you my love

thank you my friend

and all those who let me cry tears on them

but know I must rise

 

The pain all too real

alright my feathery pet I made a deal

the wittiness of death

my fur pricks and my claws unsheathed

my tail flicks back and forth

my head lowered

blue eyes flaming

burning... no freezing blue

 

 

I reach out for something to pull myself up

and you my love stands there with an open hand

I grasp it my eyes still glowing in wonder

a spaz makes me fall against you

I reach to snatch at what it is hurting my back

I turn pale as I feel something soft

something folded against my side

I wrap my other hand behind my back

another!

 

 

I step back in shock and twirl around to see something unravel

wings!

bronze and black tipped wings

they are gorgeous!

 

 

My loved and hated pet above the tree tops

swiftly flying over us with spread wings

the force of the wind pushing me into you

I blush tucking my wings back

you chuckle and take my hands away

you reach around me and reveal the wings again

 

 

Beautiful...

you whisper in my ear

I squirm at your hot breath

 

 

No... it's weird

I breathe embarrassed

 

 

No it isn't

you roll your eyes

they're beautiful

just like you...

Author notes

I guess you could say I'm feeling better now... I drew the picture of my new form and it's my picture profile now so... yeah.. Thanks friends!

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  • Dark-Ecanus27
    November 9

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    *chuckles* that last bit really does sound like me doesnt it? as for the poem itself, beautiful write, i am truely impressed by your blossoming abilities and am so proud to watch you grow.


    • Seraph Avalon
      November 9
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      -giggles- Yes it does. That's what I like about this one. I also like twirling around to see I have wings xD