too small to taste,
but small enough to trap under my thumb
and fit in the palm of my hand
with no trace left behind
of the sweet indulgence
that i came to know
and unless you want to capture fingerprints,
you'll be forever searching
for the person guilty
of stealing the lastcookieinthejar
( i destroyed the evidence
and damn was it ever good)
Author notes
prompt: cookie crumbs
(think small)
decent? meh.
maybe
A contest entry
- tip of the thumb by acoustical.
1600 points, ended November 19, 2009, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any ways i could have possibly make this any better?
Comments
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hehe. Like the "damn it was good part". I like how this can have differen meanings. Excellent write! Best of luck in your contest.
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ha ha i like that part too
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Let me when this is done.
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tis done...
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