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Effortless

blurred
you close your eyes
feel the cold chills slowly embrace
the barrier that keeps in all those rainbows
Vivid lights from your arms and neck
as your childhood toys sway in a swift motion
not felt on the dance floor

maybe the walls are beginning to crumble
the realization of
pushing the envelop
the smell in the air is different
burnt and warm

your head bobs to the sounds
that remind you of last nights essence
Things are moving too fast
you just want to stop time and dance

but tonight,
it's just the dancing of your body hitting the dashboard
the beat of your heart pounding in fear

it's time
the crash of


ecstasy
and a shot of whiskey

became the crash of your car.

















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A freewrite option...called ecstasy, a shot of whiskey, and a car crash... enjoy

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