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Condoms

I am a pillar
beneath a façade,
a shelter to shade
my heart.

So safe
in that sterile climate,
never going insane again,
unless she’s way too hot.

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28 words
prompt 1:

'From now on, I'm a use self control
instead of birth control
cause 315 dollars ain't worth your soul'
- common

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 10

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    Like this one hun
    made me smile
    and they do make cool balloons too hehe
    best wishes and well done on your HM
    Julie


  • michael thomas gold member
    November 9
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    cutsie.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 9
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    condoms make awesome balloons


  • Tzipora
    November 9

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    i liked this alot. i think you used the prompt very well.

    my favorite part:

    never going insane again,
    unless she’s way too hot.


    nicee, thank you for entering.


  • Naridill
    November 9
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    Nice use of poetic devices.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    November 9
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    Wow, awesome! Good luck!

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