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Silence #2

Silence is a funny thing.
You either welcome it
as reflective peace,
or you drown  and let it
master your fate.


Silence can speak lonely;
Echoing even in the day.
It wraps the heart cold,
freezing shattered cubes
of life.


(C) Debby Sorensen Carlson
    11/09/2009

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    November 25, 2009

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    this rings so true. sometimes the silence can be a bit too deafening.

    very nicely done.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 16, 2009

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    oh Debby this is just stunning!!
    beautiful peice here

    love and blessings

    Rend


  • ProudMomma
    November 10, 2009
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    short and very sweet i love it!


  • LadyBird
    November 10, 2009

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    AWESOME

    What an awesome write...keep up the good work


  • Jet City Woman
    November 10, 2009

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    No kidding, I can relate to this....Sometimes, I wish for silence, and yet sometimes it gets too quiet. This poem spoke to me, I loved it!

    xoxo
    KJ

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