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Rend The Veil

I know this friend for a very long time.
Little did she know I had a crush on her
She is so fine.

It took all my nerve to just to ask her out.
I was waiting on rejection but she said yes out loud.
I took her home to my place
Walking behind her up stairs watching her grace,

Thankfully my place was clean plus I had lots to drink.
I told he I needed a shower because I felt like I stink.

Please make yourself at home.
I never had someone so beautiful walk in my thrown.

Into the shower I was washing my hair.
Then my privet parts then soap my skin every wear.

When I rinsed off then pulled the curtains back.
There she was with two drinks with her skirt giving me attractions.

She said there is no need for you to put any cloths on.
I found this robe it is easy to get off.

I loved the way she was thinking.
She led me to the couch then we started to lip sinking.

She is a beauty my body was on fire.
She knew how to love and keep me in desire.

I wish I can have this woman over and over again. 
The Pleasure we have would never stop, a flame that will,
Never Quit..

Please love me the same..  I hope you understand this..

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This is for you Rend.... JackReed

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  • Riftkin gold member
    November 16
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    This is wonderful and I see she likes it.
    Best wishes with it.

    Riftkin


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 9

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    Aww Jack this was so sweet i could feel your
    crush, and you blush!!! , thank you so much
    for presenting me with this Gem, your write
    is precious to me, thank you Jack your a
    sweeties

    love and blessings

    Rend


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 9
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    A lovely dedication
    best of wishes in the contest

    Passionspromise