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Autumn




Autumn
the cold winds blow
the leaves fall to the ground
the frosty cold winds blow so hard
the cold weather really makes me shiver
and I dream of warm days to come
when all does come alive
another season
autumn





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Rictameter 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2 syllables

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  • Wonderful job with this piece. Great imagery and fantastic form you have chosen. Thank you so much for entering my contest.


  • lindaburns gold member
    November 22
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    This isn't bad at all. Remember: You must provide a link in the author’s notes to describe the poetry form you have chosen.  Good luck in the contest.