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Happy Birthday~



Within the nights chilled air

his soul came to my side

calling from the other world

his melencholy was not disguised.


I felt a hand on my shoulder

as I shuddered in the cold wind

and felt his embrace

as he swept me into his arms.


"I've come for you" is what he said

and I embraced this being in twilight.

Never again to embrace his soul

as I had so many nights ago.


"Be well my princess" he whispered to me

as his hand caressed my cheeck.

His warmth was so real and so divine

as he then kissed my lips, so tender and so kind.


When I opened my eyes after such an embrace,

trembling I found myself alone in the nights moonilight-

his tender embrace a mear memory...

My soul to never feel the warmth of his soul again-


Until we meet in another life

I wait for you this day and try to complete my thoughts.

The wind blows coldly through my hair

I shiver....



Until next year my love.

Feliz Cumplianos!




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  • LaCkOfCoLoUr
    December 17, 2009

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    this is a great romantic write, i really love the word melancholy and the way it is used,
    thankyou for the great read.


  • sgking123 gold member
    December 6, 2009

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    wow

    this was cool...from the other side of the world you felt him so good and true and embrace ya and love ya....geee..this was realy a dera poem......and did ya real feel his ever or justa poem


  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    November 19, 2009

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    I love the sentimentality laced with sensual undertones of this piece. A truly beautiful piece !. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!!