I am the sexually-proud and dominant
excruciatingly confident
honest man who understands
nature's mating master-plan
Wink;
smile
My eyes scan her
from toe to head
then lock dead on her pupils
dilated like wine spills;
it must be my divine skills
that have her mind thrilled
Now enough sub-communication;
it's time I draw on my verbal temptation
and ignite within her
feelings of fascination
so she senses the sensation
of my masculine manifestation
We talk;
she laughs
I like to play with your emotions
make you feel plethoras of moods
as I move across the room
in slow motion;
attracting her oceans
into flooding the coastline
The girl feels so fine
but I don't let her touch me
when she reaches her hands out
to brush me lustfully;
my mindset is my jubilee
though many men do disagree
She stares at me;
I kiss her
I'd rather make love
under mango trees
just the faint glow
of you and me
trippin' heavily on LSD;
care-free and happily
laying on cloud-grass
laughing the day away
then I pick my legs up
and walk away
with a sly smile
letting her wonder and cry
as love hurts meanwhile
Though I will return in time:
it's the nice jerk's pristine style
for she and I
truly find it worthwhile
And I dream of myself
laying supremely independent
on my resplendent continental shelf;
a man imbued
with relationships
inner-wealth and health
And she dreams of me too
in her own tints of truth
~AW 11/9/09
Author notes
S w e e t W a t e r
Prompt: Every girl's dream guy.
A contest entry
- Real Men and Women by AndrianTimeswift.
800 points, ended December 4, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
I doubt this is every girl's dream guy. I think it more likely that this is what some guys dream they were, and they wish the girls would react that way. And I happen to know several girls who would find the LSD to be a huge turn-off.
Altogether, this poem is well-written, though. Good write. -
-
Yeah, girls these days think acid tabs are so creepy. You would have to be a complete freakshow to even think of doing drugs!
-
-
An intriguing piece that trips inside
a world of self confidence. Light and
playful with a hint of passion and fantasy.
Not bad. Thanks for your creative spin on the prompt
-
This was a very enjoyable read, I absolutely loved this stanza
"I'd rather make love
under mango trees
just the faint glow
of you and me
trippin' heavily on LSD;
care-free and happily
laying on cloud-grass
laughing the day away
then I pick my legs up
and walk away
with a sly smile
letting her wonder and cry
as love hurts meanwhile"
but over all this was a magnificent piece, very well written. =}
good luck in the contest!
-
-
lol thank you, you always love all of my poetry!
Seems like you liked the tangent the most haha when I stray from describing the perfect man.
I have all of that...except the mango trees...I dunno if I want to buy acid tabs either though. Hmm and cloud grass...lol -
-
yeah i have to admit, i do love most of your poetry that i read, I think you're just a good writer.
lol.
-
-
Hm, maybe I'll write a poem just for you sometime.
Only if you're good lol.
-
-
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
