With my tender hands
Let me remove your cloak of mistrust
Slowly revealing your
Silken gown of regret.
I'll whisper quietly
Come my love
Let me remove the veil
Of sorrow from your face.
Let me kiss your lips
To remove the jewels of deceit
Discarding your fears
As I hold you near.
Kissing your shoulders
I’ll eliminate the hatred from your hips
Sliding them down to the floor
On you, they will be no more.
Undressing you slowly
Stripping you down
Of the evil
That has held you bound.
Now you can emerge
As the beautiful butterfly
That is within your cocoon
Setting you free.
A contest entry
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800 points, ended November 18, 43 entries
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Comments
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Wow!!!!! Undoubtably and absoluted, this is an awesome poem. I really liked the wording, flow and the way it read. Thanks for entering the contest. Take care and have a great day.
Sandi
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Thank you very much.
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I find this beautiful, many women will find themselves in this and tears will fall.
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Thank you, and I hope they will be tears of joy and happiness!
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