What?
What do you mean
the world is coming
to an END?
How could this have happen,
and
where have I been
all of these hundred years
or more?
Well, I guess
this is what happens
when one misses
out on very important messages.
Guess I must have been
well you know
having yet another talk with death.
Yeah, that must have been it.
For you see, he and I talk all the time,
about this and that,
and every now again
how if the world came to an end,
how he would be out a job.
Yes, yes, I know.. but you see,
he ended up laughing
right along with me.
Told me that the world would
never end, so he would never
be with out a job.
Seems we were both wrong,
yet, in a way we are both right.
For the would will never end,
it will just fade into the sunset.....
REALLY.. for when the sun goes out
MANKIND is sunk......
brr... it will be kinda cold then.
So hell might be a better place to keep warm,
though.. I think I will just keep on living
as if I did not know any of this right now
if you do not mind...
Have fun one and all,
and please come back again,
before we all have
time to just vanish...
Author notes
R i f t k i n
A contest entry
- Make Fun Of The End Of The World by michael thomas.
1400 points, ended November 11, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My poem, do not like it, back space.
Comments
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This is great, I loved how it seemed as though we were having a conversation. Great write! I wrote a poem about an encounter with death also that I think you would like.
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"Told me that the would would..."--> I think you mean "Told me that the world would..."
easy mistake to make 
random as all hell to be sure 
love it! fun, quirky and wicked!
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Thank you for that catch.
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LMAO
this is so random, witty and clever..i love the prompt as well..everytime i wake up I'm kinda in shock because the world had not ended yet
..trust me this is not my wacko humor..I'm really shocked..I love your take on this situation..the end is coming something or another
, we might as well laugh at it
wish you the very best..love ya Sis.. David 
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Funny
Oh this was great. Soo funny, you did so amazing with the theme. Best of luck in the contest
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As I said before, I do LOVE your wit; your humor
This is a very cool write, hon
I wish you all the very best in this contest and remember you are loved
Sandy
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The picture of the fantasy angel with a sword is just magnificent and thank you for the lovely poem. I assume the angel is the angel of death? I have never seen death look so grand.
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