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Widow Black... a Sonnet?

That spider decked out in eight shiny shoes
adorning her small feet were red stilettos
her toes stuck out and they were manicured
sunglasses perching quaintly on her nose

And coming up behind, don't you suppose
a handsome brute - soooo dressed to kill
Young Spider who gunning for her virtue
He tagged along.. I think his name was Phil

I watch her as she spins and weaves, I spill
some glitter on the web she weaves so fine
Phil creeps closer lasciviously will
she take him in with her to eat or dine

She kicks off her shoes settles in the sac
She’s known around this web as widow black

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  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    November 10

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    This is such a charming poem..brilliant penning
    the imagery is marvelous..the rhyme is tight and the flow is smooth
    actually, this could be a great metaphorical piece as well
    Write On! you are a talented poetess..David