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So Blue A Fairy


Like the sky before a rainfall drenches,
When the clouds will gather there.
Like a storm about to happen ,
Up in the atmosphere .
Such a time is when this fairy ,
Gathers dreams and memories .
Gathers smiles and so sad feelings,
To hang upon her fairy tree .
So blue a fairy always lingers ,
On the upper ends of clouds,
She lies within their golden twinkle ,
And she loves the thunder loud .
So blue a fairy writes her own songs ,
Full of joy and longing too .
Tears may fall upon the paper ,
Still she writes a song so blue .
Midnight drear you'll find her sitting ,
In a city park at night ,
Because it's when the light is navy ,
She often gets her heart just right .
Slip away blue fairy princess ,
Leaving nothing in your trail ,
Only maybe strange sweet music ,
And a wispy pale blue veil....

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  • judmc
    November 20
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    Enchanting

    This is a lovely sweet magical poem enough to induce none believers to
    enter the world of the fabulous, fabled, nebulous realm of dreams known to us believers as Fairyland,,,,,,Magical Wishes....George.....


    • Green Stars
      November 20
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      I Believe

      Thank-you so much for your comments.I have always been fascinated by the fairy realm.


  • black-phenoqu
    November 9

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    this is a beautiful poem. once again.

    can't tell you anything about this that won't be said again. absolutely lovely. if you don't get gold, i will be shocked.

  • This is magical. You painted a lovely picture of this sad fairy. Wonderful take on the prompt, the ending lines are perfect. I really enjoyed reading, thanks for entering! =}

    • Green Stars
      November 9

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      You are very welcome...your choice of prompts was fantastic....

      • Thanks alot =} this picture seems to be the favorite. I have like 5 entries for that prompt. haha.

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