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Anger

The fire sweeps throughout her,
The fuming haze pushing its way into her heart
As her fists curl automatically into angry balls
And her body begins to shake uncontrollably

This new emotion, this new feeling
Bursts with the delight of being brought out
There is no explanation for a feeling like this
Just the power of murder lingering on your fingertips
Is enough to prove how much strength she contains…

One word, two words, three words, and it has started
The sound fight ringing into her brain
And for a period of time,
That is all that she can consider
She can only imagine inflicting pain on someone else

No matter how controlled she is,
When she gets pushed too far
She becomes the aggressive, violent person she swore she’d never become
And that is that.
She is full of rage, and nothing can stop her now
You never know how far she’ll go, until she gets her vengeance.

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  • scars of life911
    November 9, 2009

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    Wow. I liked this poem very much. It was deep and meaningful. Everyone has anger, yet ppl seem to forget that woman r just as capable of violence when pushed to the edge. This is merely a suggestion, but it could use a little more flow, a little rhyme here and there, and a few more stanzas. But other than that, it was an amazing write!