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Adopted girl

I cannot fly
I cannot think
I am not here
I am not there.

I live a life
so fake and sad
Why couldn't I
have had a Dad?

I am alone
It seems all gone
Where could she be
The one who is my mom

I have no one to hold my hand
but all I want is for someone to love me

But here I go again
Emo, Emo, plain

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