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Angel of serenity

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Constantly poised, for she wraps me in tranquillity,
she is peace of mind, for now they are surrounded in calm stillness,
the angel of serenity, knelt before,
as I laid the flowers upon the floor,
no lord above, or heavenly gate, just a stone,
engraved the name.

What am I? The angel of serenity,
for I am the wings, which helped those fly safe,
what am I? Serenity is my name,
for I am not crying, that is how I pray.

Composed with affection, silently singing,
for she is my memory, of all the times,
the angel of serenity, who once,
would dance enthrallingly,
across the ballroom floor, in her flowing dress,
now laid to rest,

What am I? An angel to represent,
for I am a symbol, the loss of  your best friend,
what am I? But a keep sake upon the skin,
for I am not sad, I am happy to have been.

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  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    November 30
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    i don't see your name on my favorite list.

  • Hotlips 26
    November 17
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    JUST A QUESTION WHERE DID YOU GET THE PICTURE IT IS REALLY NICE.

  • Hotlips 26
    November 17
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    OH SO SAD YET SO WONDERFUL, I LIKE THE LAST 2 LINES AND NO PLACE IS CLOSER THAN UPON THE SKIN. LOVIN IT


  • Michael
    November 15
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    Beautiful and sad all in one. A wonderful poem that truly does touch the heart. Excellent job.


  • Natural Disaster
    November 10

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    I'm impressed

    I love it, the passion I was talking about? All there. The rhyme you threw in along with the repeated question "who am i?" a perfect mix. GL.

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