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Solid friendship (story)

Once there was a dog named Nelly and a rat named Niles they were the best of friends, the only problem with that was Niles was bigger then Nelly so cats would be chasing Nelly instead of Niles so it was a bit odd. One day when Niles came home from getting dog food for Nelly he was devastated to find a note from Nelly that read...

 

 

Dear Niles im sorry but i must go away because im tired of people making fun of me just because im smaller then a rat, goodbye... your bestest tiny friend

 

Nelly

 

 

He looked everywhere for Nelly but he finally gave up so he went home ,sat on his tiny furry couch and looked at his tiny picture frame of him and Nelly then something caught his eye under all that puffy fur that Nelly had, he saw a tiny tip of a tail and realized that Nelly didn't know she wasn't a dog but she was really a mouse.

 

As soon as he spotted this blooper  he heard a little sneeze under his little bottom he was happy to find out he was sitting on top of Nelly he quickly got a tiny razor and shaved off all of Nelly's fur and Nelly looked at her tail and for the first time ever Nelly realized she was a mouse .

 

 

Later on that day when Niles and Nelly were walking, animals all over were pointing at Niles's button and laughing, Niles looked down and discovered that while he was shaving Nelly's fur off he shaved the hair off of his little tiny bottom accidentally.

 

His bottom was shiny and he looked at his reflection on it all day. Nelly dropped something and when Niles bent down in front of Nelly to pick it up she screamed in a high pitched voice..

 

 

I'M BALD ?!

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    February 2
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    this is a great prose, just a neat funny joke and story
    the joke was on Niles


  • HereComesTheSun
    December 13, 2009
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    you are such an adorable writer
    and so much like your mom. im glad she gave me your name :]


  • catz Moderators member
    November 10, 2009

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    Talk about an identity crisis... poor Nelly, poor Niles. It's a good thing they're such great friends or else something like this could cause a big rift in their relationship

    This sure made me laugh and it's sort of a mind twister. A very fun read


    Auntie Mystic Soul


  • Nikkiola
    November 9, 2009
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    haha well thank you :3


  • morningstar1948 gold member
    November 9, 2009

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    Oh my Nelly bald. Lolsssss

    Help grandma she fallen and cannot get up.. I love this story. Grandpa did too. Oh my you make the light in my eyes shine my little dear Granddaughter
    Love you
    Grandma Morningstar


  • Breathing.Poetry
    November 9, 2009
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    cute!!! :'D

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