You said that I was worthless,
And I believed you.
You said that I wasn't special,
So I lived that way.
You said that I didn't deserve a life,
So I tried taking it.
Ashamed of the person in the mirror.
Always trying so hard to fix her.
But I am still broken,
Far from being fixed.
Shattered into tiny parts,
Trying to make the pieces fit.
You don't know the pain I feel inside.
You don't know the feelings that consume me.
Never-ending sadness,
Intense anger,
On-going depression.
You don't know how this pain,
has slowly driven me insane.
This depression has taken over my life.
Now you know why I hurt myself with a knife.
Welcome to my life.
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My favortie part is "You don't Know How this pain has slowly driven me insane. This Depressionhas taken over my life. Now you you know why i hurt myself with a knife" its a really good stanza I loved it..
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This is Incredible. Wow.
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this has a great flow and is so matter of fact. there is a really cool and detached tone to this poem, which is really different from what i've read on this subject matter. i liked it alot and it ends great. i'm gonna read some more. stay true.
*Leah
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Wow i really love this. Its simpld and straight to the point and very easy to relate to very nice work. Keep it up.
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