Nothing she does is ever right.
One little mistake can turn into a fight.
Nothing is ever good enough for you.
She is so sick and tired of trying to please you.
She's fed up with all the yelling and screaming.
One day she finally decided she was leaving.
She's ready to leave this broken home.
She know she would be better on her own.
She doesn't know what road she will walk.
All she knows is where she doesn't belong.
She had never made a sound,
All the while you were holding her down.
So, this will be a surprise to you.
Loosing the daughter you never knew.
Does the last stanza make sense?
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This is Awesome I can feel and see everything thats goin on I knw how that is too...It reminds me of myself a lot..I feel like i dont belong when I'm with my dad...I wouldn't change anything about this poem u dod 100% awesome
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Wow. This was very well written. The whole poem was great but I especially liked the last stanza. I really liked this though, it's a little too close to stuff going on in my life right now. Ha, but other then that it was great, I loved it. sad situation but very well written and very powerful =)
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Thanks so much!
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this is so powerful i love it <3 <3 well done
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Thank you!
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Thank You!
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