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Door of Opportunity

 

 

 

Today a new door opened

                                     a promise has begin

 

last evening was a special event

                                   I met my e-mail friend

 

We exchanged a hello and hug

          feeling a warmth that touched my heart

 

dinner in a cozy restaurant

exchanging smiles and thoughts from the start

 

Not knowing what the future holds

                                       a promise has begun

 

sharing ideas and laughter

             with a friend encompasses a lot of fun

 

Looking back at the past times

                            memories must be set aside

 

a new door of opportunity has opened

                     anticipated love I welcome inside

 

 

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Your Love Story . . . kinda

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  • RatherImaginative silver member
    November 11
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    Oooooh . . . the part of a relationship that can be the most exciting and fearsome at the same time: that initial walk through the open door, and not knowing what one will find on the other side. I didn't meet my guy through the internet, but I felt some definite trepidation before going into meet him for our first date. The piece ends on a hopeful note, which is as it should be, regardless what memories of past experiences still might haunt. Thanks so much for entering my contest!


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 9
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    VERY PROMISING!!!

    Such things are a joy to see happening to someone who deserves something good.


  • michael thomas
    November 9
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    best looking background I have seen so far.
    poem of lovely thoughts also.

  • judmc
    November 9
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    nice one

    A nice cozy fireside poem, the past is nice to remember
    but you can only live in the present but the door of opportunity
    is always good for a challange if brought into the present which it invariably is.I liked the last two lines the best they encompass the tenses best... Best Wishes...George...