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Furry Hugs

Are often forgotten
When you forget who's your Mother
It looks like her it has the same nose
Cold and wet but yet no fleas
I'm sure Mum had some last time I looked
I must search for her circus performers
Aha! there's one it has to be
"Mummy dear Mummy where have you been?"
You said you'd gone to see the Queen
But that's so wrong it was in fact a cat
Come here Mummy breathe in my scent
I didnt shower it was very late
Do I smell sweet or sweaty again
Lick me clean now you know I love you so.

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  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    November 9

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    HAHAHAHA
    I saw the cute prompt and smiled
    This is such a darling write that captures th eimage so very well
    Very delightful..wish you the very best..love & light..David


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 9

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    Awwh, I loved this poem. It was so sweet. Love the contest prompt. So cute Great job on this poem and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.



    -Steve-