inside I'm crying, outside I'm smiling
no one notices, though i don't want this
but its so hard to control this
when i walk by, you cant see but
but I'm hoping to die
these thoughts racing through my head
then come all the tears i never shed
how can i change all these tears and the rage
everyone tells me they understand
and all that i need is a helping hand
you all may be right
first take a flight through my life
see all the sorrow and pain
do this and you'll understand my shame
as time moves slower, my self-esteem lowers
now tell me am i worth this
or do you see me as worthless???
Author notes
some of the phrasing in this i have picked by reading others poetry...so yea
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Sounds like song lyrics
I like your rhyming style. Your poems ar very deep but straight to the point
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wicked good
nice
very nice
i can relate so muhc
everyone thinks they know what your going through
they dont know anything
great job -
I really liek this piece and it says a lot, a really great write. Brilliant!
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wow
this was very welll written
i liked it a lot
the imagery used was very exceptinal
i can relate to it very much
everyone thinks they can help because they think they know whats going on
ha
little do they know what really is happening
loved it
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wonderful
better than Goodbye!! (ben tho...*cough cough* lol miss u ill all u l8r!!!
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