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Awakening

New day rises, from the ashes of night
Gossamer strands lengthen, drawing light

 

Eyes slowly open, consciousness stirs

Edginess recedes as nightmares blur

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Prompt: Blur

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  • Wonderful job you've done with this piece. I absolutely love those first two lines. Thank you so much for entering.